Most often, the teenagers adopt this habit just because of the company they enjoy. Sometimes, they take a puff from their friend’s cigar. Later on, they develop the habit of smoking as an indispensible part of their lives. With the passage of time, the followers of this bad habit turn into chain smokers. It must be kept in mind that smoking is a toxic habit that may develop lungs’ cancer. Moreover, the other toxic chemicals like arsenic, carbon Monoxide, methane, acetic acid, nicotine, butane and cadmium present in cigarettes are also highly damaging for health.
Below are sample essays I have received from your classmates. For each essay, I'll post at least a couple examples of papers with my comments so that you get a sense of what I am looking for. I intend my comments to be constructive, and they may sound harsh or sometimes appear sarcastic, but I read these drafts trying to be a typical reader, giving a sentence-by-sentence run-down of what's going through my head. In essence I am having a mental dialog with these papers, and my comments range from notes about the content and structure to grammar and usage.
Firstly, preheat your oven to make its temperature reasonable. Secondly, put the dry cake mix into mixing bowl. Now, add required amount of water, oil, and eggs into the mix. Next, mix it all with mixing spoon until it gets smooth and free of clumps. Then, grease the cake pan with the shortening. Now, flour the pan gently. Next, put the cake batter into cake pan making its surface even. Then, place the cake in the oven and bake it for around 30 minutes.
Take the cake out of the oven when it is baked. To check it if it is baked enough or not, put through it a needle or something like it to the bottom. If it comes out clean, the cake is fully baked. Leave the cake to cool.